Cinderstorm [hi I'm new]

[unicloud]

Name:
Cinderstorm

Gender:
She-cat

Age:
21moons

Rank: Newly-made warrior of Snowclan

Description:
Cinderstorm is built for speed. Her body is slender and she has swift paws. Cinderstorm has a soft Grey pelt with darker spots all over her back, and has blue eyes brimming with energy. Her long coats makes it easy to stay warm in leaf-bare, but gets burrs in her tail which she hates.

Personality:
Cinderstorm is at first glance a shy cat, but if you know her well she is energetic and relaxed in your presence.
She shows strong loyalty to her Clan even if she's not Clan-born,
and is compassionate to cats weaker than herself. She can be very hot-tempered to cats of rivaling clans or cats who are evil.

History:
Cinderstorm was found by the clan when she was a kit, and raised as a Snowclan cat. Her origins are unknown.

Kin, mate, crush:
NIL for all.

Note from me:
Hello, I'm new here so please do not blame me if I do something incorrectly.

[Elphie]

Welcome! Just so you know, we generally use this form for our characters bios.

Picture; (Optional)
Name; (Cat’s name)
Gender; (She-Cat or Tom)
Age; (In moons please)
Clan;
Rank; (If it is Deputy, Medicine Cat, or Medicine Cat Apprentice, it must be applied for)
Description; (A physical Description, a good paragraph at least, but you should have strong details)
Personality; (A good paragraph or two will do)
History; (This is optional, as it can be explained during Role play)
Kin; (Can not be ignored. If they aren’t known, then put ‘unknown,’ or ‘deceased,’)
Mate; (If none, then ignore)
Crush; (Ignore if they have a mate)
Kits; (Ignore if they have none)
Role Play Example; (Only needed for the first cat’s application)

Also, you may want to add more detail to your characters description and personality.

[& // Sarah]

Welcome to SP! : D I'd be happy to accept you into SnowClan if basically, you do what Elphie said. xD A little more description would be nice, and since this is your first cat, you'll have to give a roleplay example.

[unicloud]

Oh really? Ok, here's my roleplay example.
RP example:
The moon shone its faints rays and stars sparkled in the night sky. Cinderstorm curled up in the warrior's den, thinking about her adopted life in Snowclan.After she was adopted, Snowclan might be the same, but being adopted into a clan changed Cinderstorm's life forever. She had a warm nest, she had family to call her own. These were priceless to Cinderstorm who may not survived kithood without Snowclan.
Snowclan has been kind to me, I will protect it with my life, Cinderstorm murmured, mind filling with dreams as waves of exhaustion swept over her.